Final Storyline

We felt as though the previous storyline was a lot better than the previous drafts however we still felt that the storyline wasn't strong and powerful enough to engage the audience into wanting to come and see the film, we have made a few changes and mixed it around slightly to create our final storyline :

we have decided to have the storyline played backwards from the end to the beginning at a fast pace and then it would be played normally at a normal pace up until the end scene. we feel this will add in a more exiting and psychological feature.

STORYLINE
*this is the way we will make it seem like it is the stalker rewinding the film then playing it again*

1) The shot of the bike wheel spinning, zooms in on shadow OR of the shadow walking over the bike on the floor.

2) Shot of George biking down a road and round the corner

3) Shot of George leaving his house carrying his bike.

4) Shot of George getting post, flicks through all of the post to reveal the newspaper article throws the article onto the side

5) The shot of George receiving the e-mail and moving towards the front door

6) Shot of George receiving text message and throwing phone

7) Shot of Becca - split screen into 4 - her eye OR hand and her mouth putting on lipstick and finally on the largest part of the screen her laying out the Polaroids.

8) Several shots of George doing tricks

*All of the above will be played backwards for example the shot where George bikes down the street will actually be him biking backwards back into his house; the following set of shots will be played through normally*

9) The same several shots of George doing tricks played through normally

10) shots of Becca her hand, eye and mouth and her laying out the Polaroids

11) Shot of George receiving text message

12) Shot of George receiving e-mail

13) Shot of George receiving post and reading the newspaper article

14) shot of George leaving house and biking down the road

15) Shot of bike wheel spinning with either shadow or zoom

16) Institutional info

17) Final shot of George locked in a room; the screen will be split into 4 and there will be a CCTV edit to make it look as though George is being watched from all angles.